Denise's+Descriptive+Writing

= = = __**Descriptive Writing**__ = The dark black unearthly smoke:

It was a freezing cold, spine chilling afternoon. Jake and David was on the huge battlefield ready to go back to the ANZAC Cove when all of a sudden **‘BOOM’** Dark black smoke started to spread everywhere. It gave David an awful fright; he started to run faster like a cheetah towards ANZAC Cove. Jake was following David in the back yelling something, but David didn’t seem to hear it he was too busy running. The unearthly smoke started to fade away. David turned around to see if Jake was there. But then his big smile turned up-side down into a frown, Jake wasn’t there...

Denise