Marc's+Descriptive+Writing

//ANZAC day.// //Rocks laying there right in front of our eyes and you just can’t stop sizzling from the red hot sun, it’s so boring as days pass sitting in this hell hole. As bullet capsules fly past and grenades blow the ground to pieces, planes flying in the sky while dropping objects from way up high. As we sit there waiting for sunset flares go BANG lighting up the sky with beautiful light.//

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